The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart demonstrates the percentage of households having electrical appliances and the number of hours spent on doing chores per household per week from 1920 to 2019.
Overall, while the proportion of electrical appliances followed an upward trend, the opposite was true for the total time spent on doing housework. Additionally, the figure for vacuum cleaner remained stable at 100% from 2000 to 2019.
In 1920, 40% of households possessed washing machine and this figure climbed to around 65% in 2019. There has been a significant increase in the percentage of vacumm cleaner, from 30% in 1920 to the peak at the end of the period. Notably, the vacuum cleaner experienced the most dramatic upsurge, rising from a mere 0% to more than 50% in 1940 and then going up steadily to finish the period at the peak of 100%.
During the remaining time, the number of hours spent on doing household chores fell sharply from 50% in 1920 to nearly 20% in 2016.With support from appliances, the time for housework of each family kept going down and fluctuated throughout the rest of the period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
... from 50% in 1920 to nearly 20% in 2016.With support from appliances, the time for h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89189189189 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61984336458 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2936502241 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.285714286 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199888204642 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966492779734 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776396244501 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138683023766 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629405797755 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.