The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990 2000 2010

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The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010.

The three pie charts illustrate degrees granted at the National University, in different matters and years. The fields were Computer Science, Medicine, Law and Business, whereas the years were 1990, 2000 and 2010.

In 1990, the degrees in Computer Science and Business outweighed the others, and they had the same amount, just under one in three of total, while the degrees in Law were half and the quantity of degrees in Medicine was 25 percent.

Ten years later, in 2000, the amount of Business and Law degrees decreased at one in five and one in ten, respectively. The number of degrees in Medicine increased of 5 percent and in Computer Science of 10 percent.

In 2010, the percentages of degrees granted in Law and Medicine were like those in 1990, 15 percent and 25 percent. The degrees in Business dropped slightly, unlike the degrees in Computer Science, which grew steadily and peaked at 45 percent.

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