The given charts indicate water distribution around the world and water usage in three different sectors.
Overall, it can be seen that the vast majority of worldwide water is salt water, while ice and glaciers account for the largest percentage of fresh water. Notably, agriculture consumes the most water used in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, whereas water in Canada is used the most in industry.
Looking at the first two charts in detail, about 97% of the water in the world is salt water, compared to only 3% of fresh water. It is also noticeable that ice and glaciers make up the highest amount of fresh water, at 79%, while groundwater and surface water account for lower amounts, at 20% and 1% respectively.
In terms of the bar chart, in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, the vast majority of water is used for the agricultural field, at about 80% and 76% respectively, in comparison with only 10% of the water used for this sector in Canada. In contrast, Canada consumes the most water for industry, about 80%, while those in Egypt and Saudi Arabia are significantly lower, at just under 10% each. Water consumption by households occupies under 12% in all regions.
- The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010 78
- Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers anymore To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
- Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier while others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78109452736 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54077414952 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517412935323 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1746610391 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.125 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407158147462 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22038812515 0.103423049105 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115771898628 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306298163048 0.15604864568 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904728836306 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.