The charts below show the distribution of the world s water and the use of water in three countries

The given charts indicate the water distribution in the world and water usage for three different sectors.
Overall, it can be seen that the vast majority of world-wide water is salt water, while ice and glaciers account for the largest percentage of fresh water. Notably, agriculture consumes the most water used in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, whereas water in Canada is used the most in the industry.
Looking at the first two charts for detail, about 97% of water in the world is salt water, compared to only 3% of fresh water. It is also noticeable that ice and glaciers make up the highest amount of fresh water, with 79%, while ground water and surface water account for the lower amounts, at 20% and 1% respectively.
In terms of the bar chart, in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, the vast majority of water is used for the agricultural field, at about 80% and 76% respectively, in comparison with only 10% of water used for this sector in Canada. In contrast, Canada consumes the most water for industry, about 80%, while those in Egypt and Saudi Arabia are significantly lower, at just under 10% each. Water consumption for households occupies under 12% in all regions.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7684729064 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48948381514 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502463054187 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.885792574 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408761235607 0.215688989381 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230863786839 0.103423049105 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11125514874 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320510699024 0.15604864568 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910734654626 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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