The pie chart illustrates the percentage of total revenue by using grade levels ranging from 1 to 6. It clearly shows that money raised is high on the first, second, and fifth grade.
The dance contest has more than one-fifth revenue and highest revenue obtained from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event, however, Book sale event has the lowest that is less than ten percent. This indicates that people have very less interest in reading books.
Considering the highest contribution revenues from dance contest, cake decorating contest, and cookie sale events with the total revenue of 62.9% whereas, the bottom thee contribution is from third, fourth, and sixth grade which are the book sale, art sale, and soccer skill contest has total revenue of 37%.
As far as concerned to peoples interest, the people are more attracted towards the food events such as cookie sale and cake decorating contest which both has remarkably high revenues. On the other hand, people have very less interest in reading books and art which has fewer revenues from grade three and four for king Primary School’s recent fundraising event.
- An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments 61
- the chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010 78
- The following diagram shows how pencils are manufactured write a university lecture 65
- An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments 73
- The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e events with the total revenue of 62.9% whereas, the bottom thee contribution is...
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Line 4, column 24, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...revenue of 37%. As far as concerned to peoples interest, the people are more attracted...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, third, whereas, as to, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18378378378 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43881445051 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.024150274 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 5.23603664747 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346295844055 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163916304325 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125272438982 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218272377797 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334837774508 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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