The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science
in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.
There are three different charts displayed the result of comparing developed and industrialised countries share in attending education and science over a period of a 10 years starting from 1980.
According to the first bar chart, first of all, it could be seen that, average years of schooling had a gradual increase in developed countries and industrialised countries, although, developed countries experienced less average years in compare to industrialised ones.
Based on the second diagram, the number of scientists and technicians were enhanced during those years with similar pattern to the previous bar.
The provided last chart, shows information about budget which was spent on the both kind of countries from 1980 to 1990.
Ii is immediately apparent that industrialised countries experienced a sudden increase on research and development budget. On the other hand, developing countries had a gradual decrease on amount of money spending on research and development from 1980 to 1990.
- Government should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students, rather than supporting professional sports and art performances for the general public.Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion. 67
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- people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do? 60
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 61
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53594771242 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07659215418 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8414820214 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.166666667 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34899493782 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170718896239 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818132683289 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180555113296 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927852235613 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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