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The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates information about the most famous movies by genre among women and men in the USA in 2010, while the pie chart provides data about the percentage of ticket sold for different types of movies.
Overall, it can be seen that action movies were the preferred type of movieS among men, while a very significant number of women enjoyed romantic comedy more than men. In addition, around half of people bought ticket for action movies in 2010.
As regards the first graph, about 20% of men and women opted for comedy whereas the number who liked western fell to approximately...
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... can be seen that action movies were the preferred type of movieS among men, whil...
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...antic comedy more than men. In addition, around half of people bought ticket for ...
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... As regards the first graph, about 20% of men and women opted for comedy wherea...
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... liked western fell to approximately 10% , which was a significant 50% drop, in r...
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...roximately 10% , which was a significant 50% drop, in relative terms. In contrast...
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...f women enjoyed them. On the other hand, romantic comedy, which approximately 30%...
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...th men. As the second chart suggests, action movies got 49% of ticket sales am...
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...mong all movie categories while 24% was took by the comedy genre. Finally, 12%,10% ...
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... all movie categories while 24% was took by the comedy genre. Finally, 12%,10% an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, whereas, while, as regards, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9212962963 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47813175515 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560185185185 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1508980208 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.111111111 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8888888889 5.23603664747 265% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26994375255 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113934425167 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837875530485 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159163507028 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912892676788 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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