A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the most famous film which opted by man and woman while the pie chart illustrates the percentage of a sold ticket for 5 different films in Usa in year 2010. Overall, what stands out from the first chart is that action genre was the most popular movie whereas science fiction was the least famous movie for both woman and man.
Looking at the details, as regards first chart is that aroud 50 percent men have chosen action genre ,which was twice as popular as comedy genre with 20 percent while 25 percent of woman opted for action genre which was a little popular than comedy with 20 percent. Ranked in third place thriller genre which have opted by men and woman with 15 percent and 10 percent, respectively.Around 10 percent men opted science fiction movie compare to woman gived 5 percent.By contrast, approximately 30 percent woman enjoyed romantic comedy , which was the 6 times more popular movie for woman compare to men with 5 percent.
As the second chart suggests, action movie remain most sold movie with 49 percent opposed to thriller genre with 24 percent.The third on the list romantic comedy woth 12 percent which was a bit as popular as other films which acoounted have 10 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, third, whereas, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72350230415 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39376153118 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5591063499 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 205.0 112.824112599 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.4 22.9334400587 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 5.23603664747 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214196759184 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156914719652 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947886217107 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177924140972 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102979855893 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.2329268293 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.