The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23 65 in different occupations in one UK town Ashby and in the UK as a whole in 2008

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The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.

The diagrams above representate the UK’s people job in various ages at Ashby town and the UK country in 2008. It is measured in percentage.
Overall, it can be seen in Ashby town, the highly number owned by personal service while office work was the upper amount in the UK. The lower percentage reached by professional work in Ashby whilst unemployed and construction work were the modest number of occupation in the UK.
According to the Ashby’s data, nearly a quarter of the chart dominated by shop work, it was 21%, likewise 18% reached by office work. Comparable, 16% possessed by conctruction work from all employment in the chart. The same amount obtained not only in unemployed but also in shop work, exactly 14%. In the same way, professional work and technical work had the similar percentage around 8-9%.
Then in UK, the upper number caused by office work, which was 19%. Furthermore, the aqually percentage attained not only in technical work and personal service but also in construction work and unemployed, consecutively 17% and 10%. In addition, shop work and professional work had the equivalent amount, approximately 13-14% from all of profession datas.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, likewise, so, then, while, in addition, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08762886598 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88131419957 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8760483858 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7272727273 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176694426166 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801756319633 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995045988301 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153509410086 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113052916825 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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