The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006
The graphs above representate the cost of various bread in the one of the european countries in the last five years exactly from 2001 to 2006. It is measured in euro per 800 grams.
Overall, white bread rose dramatically in every year for five years while there were no significantly up and down in rye. The other type had erractic ups and down.
According to the data, in 2001 to 2003, the highly cost was brown bread, increased around 1 euros to 1,6 euros per 800 grams equally white rose about 0,5 euros to 1,1 euros per 800 grams in two years. Instead, wholegrain reached high increasing approximately 1 euros in the first year but dropped sharply, definitely 0,2 euros with details from 0,8 euros in the beginning to 1 euros in the second years. However, Rye remained constant at 0,6 euros per 800 grams because it dropped slightly 0,1 in the first year and rose at the same amount in the second years.
Then in 2003 to 2005, the price increased not only in white bread but also in rye, sequentially around 0,2 and 0,1 euros in the last two years. Inverse, the cost decreased in wholegrain approximately 0,2 euros, it was from 1 euros to 0,8 euros per 800 grams of wholegrain. Even so, there was no rise in brown from 2003 to 2005, the cost stood at 1,6 euros per grams of brown.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hite bread but also in rye, sequentially around 0,2 and 0,1 euros in the last two...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, while, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46610169492 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3881019112 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483050847458 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.353631554 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312115668771 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133990045927 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755894616168 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198809204213 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999013748282 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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