The charts below show the percentage of time younger and older people spend on various Internet activities in their free time (excluding email).
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of spare time consumed on six Internet activities (with the exception for email) by two group of people aging from 18 to 24 and 60 to 70.
Overall, people at both age ranges have various preference for Internet activities. However, while most of the young's free time is distributed to social networking, the older are interested in making booking for cinema and travel.
As can be from the pie charts, the young people allocate the majority of their free time to social networking and playing games, accounting for 24 % and 18 % respectively, which triple the time consumed by the elderly on the same activities. Whereas, the percentage of spare time the 60 to 70 - year- old people spent in making booking for cinema and travel, amounting to 29 %, is nearly six times higher than that of the young participants.
Although both of the young and old people like making purchases in their idle time, with nearly the same rate at 12 % and 14 % respectively, the latter are more involved in accessing films and cinema, at 21 %, that the former, at 17 %. Meanwhile, the old citizens spend 26 % of their free time in researching health data, 6 % higher than that of their following generations.
- Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person Why do you think this is the case What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person Give reasons f 84
- Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school What are the reasons What could be done to solve this problem 67
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible 84
- The table and graph below give information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1994 and 2002 67
- Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: groups
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88038277512 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72719355826 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564593301435 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5395866301 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.714285714 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262126992885 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129995866116 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283289858682 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165261865098 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131454078195 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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