The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The pie charts give information about the water used for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes in six different areas of the world.
It is noticeable that more water is consumed by agricultural than industrial or domestic in Africa, Central Asia, South America, and South East Asia. By contrast, industrial accounts for the majority of North America and Europe.
In South America, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia agricultural water consumption accounts for 71%, 84%, 88%, and 81% of total water usage. On the other hand, a mere 19%, 9%, 7%, and 7% of water used goes to domestic.
Such dramatic difference are not seen when we compare the figures for water used of North America. The proportion of water(48%) in used by industry in North America, while the figure for Europe is 5% higher, at 53%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icultural than industrial or domestic in Africa, Central Asia, South America, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00729927007 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6472913968 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3792929994 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235743357859 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125812027067 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097357994844 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171646530754 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104081883346 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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