The pie charts below depict the percentage of water consumption for three main purposes in six regions of the world.
In general, North American and Europe allocate the biggest water usage to industry, while South American, Africa, Central Asia and South Asia consume most of their water for agriculture.
Looking into the details, the percentage of agriculture water usage is highest in Central Asia with 88%, followed by Africa, Southeast Asia and South American with 84, 81 and 71% respectively, and the lowest in Europe with 32%.
By contrast, the highest percentage of water consumption in industry occurred in Europe and North America by 53% and 48% respectively, while the other four consume water in this field less than 12%. In addition, domestic water use constitutes the least portion in each region, with the rate between 7% to 19%.
- With the rise in the popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become the thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 56
- With the rise in the popularity of the internet newspapers will soon become the thing of the past To what extent do you agree or disagree 85
- Several languages die every year. Many people feel this is a positive trend and that a world with fewer languages promotes harmony and understanding between people. Analyze both sides of this argument and provide your opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the percentage of water consumption for three main purposes in six regions of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14388489209 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62738698372 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1935060371 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174569067634 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11703734129 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117864654464 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136016221849 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126048632879 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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