The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows how six mentioned areas distribute water resource for different purposes. Overall, South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia spend most of the water resources for agriculture, while the remaining areas which are North America and Europe use water mostly for industrialization. In addition, both six mentioned areas spend the lowest amount of water for domestic use.

With regards to agricultural use, Central Assia accounts for 88%, which generates the highest proportion among six areas. Following that, Africa stays at second position with 84% use of water. South America and Sout East Asia are two countries that also spend more than a half water resources for agriculture (71% and 81% respectively). In comparison, North America and Europe spend significantly fewer amount, with 39% and 32% respectively. Thess proportions are totally contrastive regarding to industrial use. North America and Europe spend higher proportion( 48% and 53% respectively) whereas the four remaining areas: Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia and South America spend literally low proportion (7%, 5%, 12% and 10% respectively).

Water use for domestic purposes generate lowest proportion in both 6 areas. South Esat Asia and Central Asia perform the same percentage of water use (7&) while Africa shows literally higher proportion (9%). The remaining three areas which are North America South America and Europe have more than 10% of water use (13%10% and 15% respectively).

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'generate the lowest'.
Suggestion: generate the lowest
...ely. Water use for domestic purposes generate lowest proportion in both 6 areas. South Esat ...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Asia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'performs'.
Suggestion: performs
...areas. South Esat Asia and Central Asia perform the same percentage of water use 7& whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47826086957 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77404933562 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508695652174 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6737933584 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193518298845 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101102837449 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074305419069 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167665331624 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070056345765 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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