The bar chart and the pie chart illustrate the reasons why US residents travelled and what problems they tackled when using their vehicles in the year of 2009.
Overall, it is clear that people in the US mainly travelled to commute to and from work in 2009, whereas the primary concern of Americans about their travels was its cost.
According to the bar chart, 49% of the trips made by Americans in 2009 were for commuting. By contrast, only slightly above one twentieth was because of visits to friends or relatives and the social or recreation purpose accounted for just 10%. Besides, the percentage of personal reasons was nearly one fifth, which was 3% more than that of shopping aim.
Looking more closely at the pie chart, the price was the key consideration for 36% of American travellers. Next, approximately one in five US citizens cited safety as their foremost travel concern, while aggressive driving and traffic jam were the main issues for 17% and 14% of the travelling public. Finally, the figures for their concern about access to public transport and space for pedestrians were 6% and 8%, respectively.
- Some people say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing together To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another 89
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- Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
- The diagrams below show the stages in the development of simple cooking equipment Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisos where relevant 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, look, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67044328188 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8394647564 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423380772196 0.215688989381 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166877206429 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890873057184 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237367425254 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789551428488 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.