The charts below show the result of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about it services
The given pie charts demonstrate the feedback on how full-time and part-time students reacted about two services, namely IT offered supports and current opening hours provided by a university library.
Overall, a large number of full-time students were satiated by both services whereas there was an existence of a batch of part-time students who have not been totally convinced.
As can be seen conspicuously from the pie charts, in terms of the surveyed full-time students, 32 percent of them reviewed that these services are adequately qualified. Besides, both having over a half of the list giving the highest standard feedback, the figure of IT support satisfaction was just 12% lower than the current opening hours’ by the virtue of 13% of them feeling disappointed about the former
With an adverse pattern, although approximately three-fourth of a load of part-time students were explicitly into the current opening hours, nearly half of them do not like IT support. Moreover, the proportions for the related individuals towards IT support and opening hours accounted for 35% and 23% respectively.
To conclude, the mentioned university library provided a superbly acceptable opening schedule for all students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ided by a university library. Overall, a large number of full-time students were satiated by bot...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rent opening hours’ by the virtue of 13% of them feeling disappointed about the f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44736842105 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95028521087 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647368421053 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.781386176 43.030603864 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.5 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275439399576 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137663287167 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998961463743 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156856760184 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898654005111 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.2329268293 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 61.2550243902 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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