The given two pie charts provide insight about two different age groups of the people and it represents the various kind of factors that makes people happy.
First of all, the achievement at work is the massive factor to bring immense happiness equally 31 %and 32% in both the age groups who comes under and over 30 age period.Whereas,the second largest proportion doing hobbies has a good significance for both age groups for making them glad.In fact,less than 15% people from each groups believe ,the other activities make them happy.
In the further scrutinizing , it can be clearly seen that the 15% young age people give much more priority to travelling as a source of happiness but the folks over 30 prefer to spend their time with family.Furthermore,18% of younger people emphasis on the importance of looking gorgeous, while the vital role is played by financial security in the life of elder people.
Overall, it indicates that both different age groups have their own way to make themselves pleased in varied ways.
- Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work.How far do you agree or disagree with the 91
- Unemployment has become a major problem in today s world What factors contribute to increasing unemployment and what steps can be taken to solve this problem 87
- The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. 78
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. 84
- Computer technologies are more accessible and cheaper, as the result, more adults’ work at home and children study at home. Is this a positive or negative development? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, whereas, while, in fact, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01744186047 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90357586117 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68023255814 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.452272706 43.030603864 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.75 112.824112599 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 22.9334400587 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.25 5.23603664747 444% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305968054089 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18411008031 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092274616764 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18411008031 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092274616764 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.2329268293 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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