The pie charts demonstrate the category of reasons which cause happiness for both gender separately. There are differences and also similarities for them.
As can be seen, it is obvious that achievement at work occupied the major amount for both groups by exactly a quarter. The largest fraction which due to being happy for men is being with family by roughly a third of total moreover it dwarfs the tiny fraction by 11% which is related to good appearance. Financial security is another important reasons for happiness among males while, the other factors contain the remain proportion for this group.
On the other hand, as it is shown financial security and doing hobbies by are the shortest fractions in females group by 15% former and 17% latter. Supporting a successful sports team that didn’t appear foe men is major amount for women by approximately one in fifth. A remain quarter goes for other factors for women which is significantly higher that mens proportion.
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- The charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. 73
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- The chart shows the proportion of graduates from bluesky university in 2006 entiring different employment sectors. 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., it is obvious that achievement at work occupied the major amount for both group...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st fraction which due to being happy for men is being with family by roughly a th...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... males while, the other factors contain the remain proportion for this group. On the othe...
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...or women by approximately one in fifth. A remain quarter goes for other factors for wome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0490797546 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7245757254 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638036809816 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4862987983 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0511868470373 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331213640129 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040006894378 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470754805177 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343704993079 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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