The two pie charts illustrates survey results of different age groups people about which gives them more happiness.
Overall, Achievement and work is the more significant part in both people below and above 30 age groups life to make them more happy and Other factors least contributed in these two category people to given them more pleasant life. In Comparison, Having a good appearance and Travelling are considered to make them happy in people under 30 category and where as these two are not at all make them happy in above 30 age groups and Financial Security and Being with Family are more important part of life to give them happiness.
Achievement and work are most considered category in people under 30 age groups which is at 31% and its at peak in above 30 groups as well but there is very slight growth in percentage to give them happiness and become 32% in life. When it comes to Other factor, it is least considerable thing in both Categories for happiness but there is 4% decline above 30 groups when compared to below 30 age people which is at 10% now.
Having a good experience and Travelling are part of under30 people age groups are at percentages of 18 and 15 respectively to provide happiness. In Comparison these two Categories not at all believed as part of above 30 age groups to contribute to happiness and Financial Security and Being with Family are taken into consideration in above 30 age groups and most significant contributed part in life when we observe at percentages which are at 20% and 14% respectively which sums up to 34% and almost one-third part in peoples life to make them happy.
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012 78
- The line graph shows the number of bananas imported to 4 countries from 1996 to 2004 73
- The line graph shows the number of bananas imported to 4 countries from 1996 to 2004 73
- The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'category' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'categories'.
Suggestion: categories
...d to make them happy in people under 30 category and where as these two are not at all m...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...m happy in people under 30 category and where as these two are not at all make them happ...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the least'.
Suggestion: is the least
...life. When it comes to Other factor, it is least considerable thing in both Categories f...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng are part of under30 people age groups are at percentages of 18 and 15 respecti...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Comparison,
...5 respectively to provide happiness. In Comparison these two Categories not at all believe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 286.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73076923077 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66382398772 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402097902098 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.4886958776 43.030603864 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.285714286 112.824112599 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.8571428571 22.9334400587 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259410032238 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161408695178 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684214567001 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199691363251 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612302163777 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.2329268293 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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