The age gap between parents and children is more in these days when compared to the past in few countries. This essay will examine the main advantages and disadvantages of having more age differences.
The two main advantages if there is a greater age difference are parents get more time to focus on career perspective and plans can be made to take of children in this gap. Parents can work on the individual goals that they are much interested to achieve. For instance, one of my colleagues, who married at age of 26 and he interested in more of cracking Civils services exam in India but usually it needs a lot of hard work to make it happen. he decided not to have children till 29 years of his age and dedicated his whole time to the preparation and finally, he became an IAS officer. Parents get good amount of time to focus on children and to take care once they settled down and even guide them to choose a better career path which would be more advantageous. For example, my neighbourhood family completely dedicated free time on their children to guide and now children of this family started up a good company which is having around 2000 employees.
However, there are some disadvantages to having more age differences when parents get older by the time children reach young age. Parents do not enjoy with children as they already grew older because a parent has to care for themselves and event children's too if there are any health-related problems and Children will have more responsibility personally about parent after reaching their matured state. there won't be any overlap of age to do work together.
To conclude, there are more advantages like parent gets time to choose a career and after that to focus on children's life although the age gap between parents and children have disadvantages of getting parents older and not getting much time to enjoy with children at an older age. I believe that advantages outweigh disadvantages in comparison to both.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91150442478 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67106497644 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498525073746 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.681184373 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286772080354 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122771425497 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711851004795 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172798481081 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714679715492 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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