The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy

The given pie charts depict the information about the outcomes of a survey between two ages groups of people who are happy in their life with different activities.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that in traveling and achivement at work under 30 age group individuals have less Happy from over 30 age group people.however, doing hobbies and having a good appearance individual have more happy over 30 ages groups

To embark on , maximum people happy under 30 age group in achivement at work abd the proportion has 31% similarly over 30 ages groups people have have almost a third percentum happy in same field. moreover,other 14% people have happy for other factors in under 30 age group but in over 30 ages group only 10% people have happy in other factors.

Moving further, daily hobbies and having a good appearance people are enjoying almost 22% and 18 % and over 30 ages group people have almost a quarter and a fifth percentage, respectively. moving ahead, traveling people have 15 % happy who are under 30 ages and 14% individual happy who are over 30 ages group.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, similarly, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82702702703 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60980561206 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497297297297 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.443181625 43.030603864 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.6 112.824112599 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259691635338 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189533829767 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600357073294 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204644242541 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570070583712 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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