The charts below shows the percentage of time eorking adults spent on working adults spent on different activities in a particulur country in 1958 and 2008.
The pie chart reveals the information about the proportion of time spent by adults on various typea of activities in a one nation in 1958 and 2008.
It is clearly seen from the chart that, the highest percent if time spent by people on working as 42% in 2008 and it was almost 33% in 1958. Wheras, going out with friend and family as well as other interests or playing sports was 6% in 2008 and 1958. Apart from this, 32% amount of time disbursed by adults on sleeping and it declined by 7% in latter year.
In addition to this, Travel to work by the adults were the least enjoyable activity as only 2 % and 8%respectively in both the years. Interestingly, 19% of adults used to spent their time on going out with friends and family as 19% in 1958. While, Relaxing at home was the 13% in 2008 that was only 8% in the initial year.
Overall, it can crystal clear that every type of activities was increased in 2008 except sleeping and going out with friends.
- The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetabkes per day in the IKfrom 2001 and 2008. 78
- The chart below shows the proportion of British students at ine university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. 78
- The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. 67
- Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in childrens others say that they should be taught to becone cooperative What is your opinion 92
- Recent studies have show that overweight people tend to eat junk food that the highest in the fat some people argue that increases in the price of such food will serve as to reduce the amount of overweight people To what extent do you agree or disagree 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... activity as only 2 % and 8%respectively in both the years. Interestingly, 19% of...
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...9% of adults used to spent their time on going out with friends and family as 19%...
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...with friends and family as 19% in 1958. While, Relaxing at home was the 13% in 2008 t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, while, apart from, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39664804469 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35960736428 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558659217877 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.5593652626 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.375 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330855924424 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146410672713 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977141518359 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214945747795 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100018919887 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.