The pie charts illustrate the percentage of tourist response in Parkway Hotel between 2005 and 2010.
At the first glance ,the proportion of excellent service was increased from 5% in 2005 to 28% in 2010. In addition ,the figure of statisfactory was noticed in 2005 below the 50 percent and 17% was observed in 2010. Futhermore ,the percentage of tourist response as poor service in Parkway Hotel was doubled of 2010 year (12%).
Turning to the remaining information in 2005 ,the visitor response very poor service was 15%. By 2010 ,it had declined gradually in 11 percent. Lastly the percentum of good service made by tourist were measured 14% in 2005 and 39% in 2010.
Overall ,it is clear from the given information ,the higher proportion of statisfactory service in 2005 and the least percentage of very poor service in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93617021277 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67092612889 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503546099291 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 195.3 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1102739225 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206300823934 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107580042959 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569002820578 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144314886671 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605109275985 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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