The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by 4 types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007

A glance at the provided bar charts depict the figures comparation of city and rural area inhabitants who were impacted by 4 different noise pollution in day and night in 2007. In general, it is clearly apparent that traffic was the most affecting noise pollutant both in day and night in the two different region compared.

Looking in more detail from the charts, although traffic affected more people both in city and outskirt during day and night, the number of people that were disturbed by traffic noise was two folds higher in town at 64 and 48 millions people in day and night, respectively. Despite traffic, the second highest noise pollutant reported in both region was train. However, the amount of person who were annoyed by train were far fewer at 6 to 10 millions people. Finally, there were only 1 to 4 millions inhabitants in city and countryside who were unhappy with aircraft noise while industrial noise only affected 0.25 to a million of citizens.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, second, so, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84337349398 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55844728096 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8896868091 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461393099132 0.215688989381 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215358679116 0.103423049105 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117643730508 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.379600597519 0.15604864568 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508240252278 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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