The given pie charts compare the proportion of working force engaged in different occupational fields mainly manufacturing, sales, and services in two towns A and B over a period of two years 1960 and 2010.
In the overall trend, nearly after half a century, a major proportional jump can be observed in the manufacturing sector in town A. on contrary, sales remained the most popular working sector in town B however, it faced a slight downfall in the latter year.
According to the given illustration, in town A, 41% of the population was associated with sales in 1960, which got shrunk by almost half in 2010. Also, nearly one-third of the masses were interested in the service sector in 1960, which dropped down by 50% in the latter year. On the contrary, the manufacturing sector that accounted for just 29% before 60 years, witnessed a huge surge by more than two-fold in 2010.
For town B, nearly three-fourth of the people were indulged in the sales sector, slipped to 53% in 2010, marked a major dropdown by 17%. However, a slight increase of 2% in the service department can be observed, but a significant rise of about 15% in the manufacturing sector shifted its percentage to 25% in 2010.
- The chart below gives information about trends in internet use by females in the USA in two years 92
- The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in the percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries 78
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- The pie charts compare the expenditure of a school in the UK in three different years over a 20 year period 84
- Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course in university education Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work How far do you agree or disagree with the above vi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, third, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84108208992 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569377990431 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5882962974 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.125 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273180452217 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114822383254 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646168262031 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171632740449 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609313233189 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.