The bar graph depicts weight levels of varied age group residing in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015. Overall, it can be observed that obesity surged a lot in 2015 and in 1955 there were more underweight people.
Interestingly in 1955 we can view that all the age range has good amount of ideal weight ranging between 10% to 80%, with the highest amounting in youngsters of age 20-29 and least among the old age of above 60 years. People who were underweight belonged to all age groups in 1955, with the least of around 15% in adults of age 40-49 and peak of 40% in age range of 60-69. There were hardly any overweight young people of 20-29 years in 1955 in contrast to people who were 20 % overweight in age range of 30-49. In 1955, obesity was an issue with the inhabitants after they turned 40 years old.
In 2015, people became more obese and less underweight as opposed to 1955. Elders of 60 years and more were highest obese and youngsters accounted accounted for barely 3-5%. However, there were more underweight crowd among 20-29 age range compared to 60-69 range. Strangely, the overweight percentage was the same in both age groups of 30-39 and 40-49 at around 40% and it surged a lot in old people from 1955. Ideal weight was the most in 20-29 age range and least in 60-69.
To sum up, inhabitants of Charlestown were less obese and overweight in 1955 compared to 2015 and there were more underweight people in 1955 than in 2015.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'were the highest'.
Suggestion: were the highest
...ed to 1955. Elders of 60 years and more were highest obese and youngsters accounted accounte...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: accounted
... more were highest obese and youngsters accounted accounted for barely 3-5%. However, there were mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, in contrast, in contrast to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 260.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55769230769 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38227922941 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442307692308 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3133154771 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117419080131 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629895841274 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511197861009 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109095158647 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420997478098 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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