Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.
Write a report for the university lecturer describing the development of the village.
The diagrams provide the overview of two different heating systems. Overall, it can be clearly seen that both pellet stove and pellet boiler are working on the wood pellets.
Regarding to the pellet stove, the wood pellets are put onto a fuel hopper then coming through a fuel feed , which is located just under the hopper. The wood pellets reach their destination at a combustion chamber, where it is burnt and hot air originated from the chamber is rising to the top of the stove and comes outside through the combustion fan. while the wastes in the form of ash are falling down to the pan. As for pellet boiler, the wood pellets are supplied to the furnace.
At the same time, at the furnace the heating process is happening and provided cold water becomes hot, then it distributed to all rooms in the house with the help of radiators. Such wastes as ash is collected in the ash receptacle which is located on the right of furnace and smoke is realised through the stack. On the whole, despite the fact that these two heating systems are working on the same fuel, the pellet boiler is heating the water while pellet stove just produce hot air.
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- The following diagrams show how a pellet stove and a pellet boiler work to heat a house 73
- Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.Write a report for the university lecturer describing the development of the village. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l hopper then coming through a fuel feed , which is located just under the hopper....
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...mes outside through the combustion fan. while the wastes in the form of ash are falli...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mes outside through the combustion fan. while the wastes in the form of ash are falli...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, then, while, as for, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61165048544 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24312787754 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529126213592 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.738824044 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00538958290737 0.215688989381 2% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00361225530605 0.103423049105 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0102170008892 0.0843802449381 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0032340946572 0.15604864568 2% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00457370052621 0.0819641961636 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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