Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
The following map illustrates various developments that occurred in Chorleywood village near London city during 1968 till 1994.
As can be clearly observed from the map, Chorleywood experienced many different improvements, the most significant of which took place in the east of the village where a roundabout was constructed. At the north of the roundabout, there were huge constructions which appeared between 1970 and 1994. Likewise, at the south of the roundabout, three distinctive regions have been built during the same period.
Turning to the western part of the village, at the southwest corner, two different residential areas, which dated back to 1922 till 1970, were observable. These areas were placed around the railway, which was built at 1909, although between these two areas there was a far newer region of 1970 to 1994. This newer area contains Chorleywood Station. Meanwhile, the oldest section of the village was located at rather central vicinity while on the right hand of this part, there were Chorleywood park as well as Golf course. The oldest section was constructed at period of 186 to 1883.
Overall, it is clear from the map that, the village witnessed enormous developments due to increasing population. Unlike the fact that village’s main roads were constructed during 1963 to 1883, the motorway was added to the village at 1970 in the eastern part.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20089285714 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78779898529 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.810259563 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.909090909 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172109795937 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772332702304 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911536111532 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152305238815 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994888354765 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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