As a class assignment you have been asked to write a description of how this plastic is produced and then broken down Using the information in the diagram write a description of the recycle

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As a class assignment you have been asked to write a description of how this plastic is produced and then broken down.
Using the information in the diagram, write a description of the recycle.

The graphic depicts the process of producing plastic and subsequently breaking it down.
Overall, the process of manufacturing plastic products from cereal crops consists of three phases. Plastic goods must be broken down in three steps.
The production of plastic goods begins with the conversion of cereal crops into glucose using a machine. The glucose is then converted into PHB polymer using a bacterial fermentation chamber. PHB polymer is utilized at the end of the process to make plastic bottles, which are subsequently packaged and shipped to customers.
There are three stages in the breakdown of plastic. The first step is dependent on nature, and it took a long time for the material to disintegrate into the atmosphere. The following stage is biodegrades of burns, which emits carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. The last stage involves recycling old plastic items. However, all three processes culminate in the same outcome: the conversion of plastic into cereal crops, which subsequently serve as raw material in the process of creating plastic items.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...its carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. The last stage involves recycling old plast...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34911242604 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79222236303 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6259879116 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1818181818 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118925046594 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561163819336 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401510662009 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880510413915 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237606745476 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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