The climograph below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in city of Kolkata.
The climograph reveal the information about the average monthly downfall, and temperature in the city of Kolkata. The data is calibrated in 'mm' and Celsius, which is clear and coherence representation.
It is clearly seen from the layout that, in the first quarter of the year, rainfall is noticed below the 50 mm. While, significant changes occur after the half of the year when precipitation has been reached 250 mm. Moreover, in July, it reaches the peak around 340 mm. After that, till September, there is a slight change in rainfall. Lastly, shoot up decline in rainpour occur in December, which is in very small fraction.
Furthermore, the evidence show that, initial temperature is at 20°C in January. However, in April, it rises by 10°C. Then, after this increased, the monthly temperature falldown by nearly 2 °C in July. Whereas, it is stable until the October. Finally comma in December, its decline again as its initial temperature.
Overall, it is observed that, there is not a noticable change in initial and final point of monthly temperature. While precipitation is also stable moderately through the year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rature falldown by nearly 2 °C in July. Whereas, it is stable until the October. Finall...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...hereas, it is stable until the October. Finally comma in December, its decline again as...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and final point of monthly temperature. While precipitation is also stable moderately...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88633464526 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610810810811 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6021402752 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2142857143 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2142857143 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219861060769 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627297219102 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121834570385 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131155113811 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112761784024 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.