The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of kolkata

The given climograph illustrates the average statistic of temperatures and precipitation levels within a year in urban areas of Kolkata.
Overall, May tends to be the hottest month compared to others, especially January and December, which are the coldest ones. In addition, residents in the city of Kolkata receives the highest rainfall in July and the lowest are in the first and last month of the year.
At the first glance, from Jan to May, the temperature levels rise from 200 degrees Celcius to more than 300 degrees. Simultaneously, precipitation rates increase slightly from nearly 25mm to 100mm in the first fifth months but rocket in June and July, accounting for over 250mm and 340mm respectively, two-thirds and over tripled of the former rate.
From May to the rest of the year, the temperature in Kolkata's city is prone to be cooler as the rate decrease gradually from its peak to almost the same one in January. The same change happens to the amount of rain, which drops mildly from the highest to over 240mm in September while it plummets in the last 3 months (from 240mm to about 10mm).

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ds and over tripled of the former rate. From May to the rest of the year, the te...
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Line 4, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...last 3 months from 240mm to about 10mm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, third, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81578947368 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65979088175 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594736842105 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8432975102 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218057469334 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105219244454 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840214339189 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142568632894 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712033671748 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.