People argued that whether workers should give up working when they reach retirement age, or they should be permitted to devote themselves to the occupation that they love. I agree with the second viewpoint.
Some people believes that employees should retire at a specific age, usually 62 to 65. The reason maybe their ability and skills such as computer liberate or their memory can be weakened because of their aging. Therefore, they are supposed to be replaced by younger generation to avoid the depletion of productivity as well as the jobless condition. Furthermore, after a long hard-working period, workers should be relaxed and spent more time with their families or their daily life.
On the other hand, there are some people who think that workers have their own choice of working. The essential reason for this point of view is that there are lots of people who spend their whole life for working, researching and exploring. For this reason, these people prone to be professional in their fields, thus they can be brilliant mentors for the companies or offices that young generation cannot.
Personally, I do not disagree that there should be a retirement age obligation for employees, however, different people have different circumstances, so that if person want to dedicate more, they need to be allowed. For instance, a 70-year-old professor still works with full of energy in excellent health condition while a 50-year-old worker prefer relaxing and settling down.
In conclusion, organizations need to establish a requirement age regulation as well as exception for a particular kind of employees. People must be accepted to choose the retirement time that suits them best.
- The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 60
- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the honeybee
- The charts show the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 55
- Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children while other think it is the fault of the parents Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19343065693 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81046780584 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602189781022 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3332173104 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417161633645 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142912411904 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998663432442 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226129631315 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670381428734 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.