The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The climograph provides information about the average monthly temperatures and rainfall during twelve months in the city of Kolkata.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that, both temperature and precipitation saw a similar trend. However, while the precipitation increased drastically during the rainy months, the temperature was low during it and saw a rise during the months of winter.
With regards to the temperature, January was the coldest month being at a temperature of 20 degrees centigrade, whereas at the beginning of the period the temperatures were low, gradually increasing and recording around 32 degrees centigrade in May. After which it declined progressively reaching to about 21-degree centigrade in the last month December.
As for the rainfall, it experienced a similar trend to that of temperature, drastically rising and hitting the high point of approximately 340 during the month of July followed by a drop. Subsequently, reaching its lowest of 10 mm of precipitation in the month of December.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... coldest month being at a temperature of 20 degrees centigrade, whereas at the be...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng around 32 degrees centigrade in May. After which it declined progressively reachin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, whereas, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26628133357 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3608502584 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.428571429 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170183665842 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905313528979 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118542824568 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137699900582 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139924925716 0.0819641961636 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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