The climograph below shows average monthly tempratures and rainfall in the city of kolkata.

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The climograph below shows average monthly tempratures and rainfall in the city of kolkata.

The given layout reveals the information about the hestiness and temprature by the monthly average of the city of the kolkata.The data is calibrated in 'mm' and celcious which is clearly and coherentely represented.
It can be seen that, the temprature of the city of kolkata from january to april is 20°c to 30°c.In addition to this, on the month of may till august, the temprature has been decreased by 30°c to 28°c.Moreover, the temprature has slightly decreased; 28°c,27°c,25°c,20°c in the month of september october november and december, respectively.
As it is crystal clear that, the precipitation of the first four years; january, february, march, april has been slightly increased by 5mm to 50mm.In addition to this, the precipitation of next four years; may, june, july, august were extremely increased and precipitation becomes 100, 250, 330, 325.Moreover, in the last four years, the precipitation were slightly decreased and becomes 300, 150, 30, 20, respectively.
Overall, it is evident that monthly figures of precipitation in kolkata stabled moderately while the hestiness take high percentage in the middle of the year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.36842105263 4.92477711251 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.53626923192 2.65546596893 208% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.9515186202 43.030603864 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.0 112.824112599 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.0 22.9334400587 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168374406469 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127455258202 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089782536315 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127455258202 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089782536315 0.0819641961636 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 13.2329268293 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 61.2550243902 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.3012195122 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.26 11.4140731707 178% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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