COLWICH GALLERY

Essay topics:

COLWICH GALLERY

The maps illustrate the layout of Colwich Arts Centre between 2005 and at present.
Overall, Colwich Arts Centre has undergone several alterations including the merger between two gallery rooms, the division of the meeting room, the renovation of wasteland and the establishment of new function areas. These developments have transformed the art centre into a more space-effective to serve more visitors.
On the left-hand side of the centre, there has been a division separating the gallery room into two rooms that now are found at the former site of the snack bar. Whereas the toilet has been removed to the right-hand side, the new drama studio has been added at the back of the centre which adjoining new meeting room 1. Furthermore, the concert hall and cinema in the middle of the art centre has been divided into two separate areas.
It can be seen from the maps that two galleries on the right-hand side have been merged into one big room and removed to the opposite side, while the café shop is now seen next to the new gallery room. The wasteland, which dominated the art centre in 2005, has been renovated with a new stage and new area for outdoor exhibition and performance.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81463414634 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58754625038 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526829268293 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.124114722 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.375 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157546687296 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729728335099 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800094304981 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110987099332 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042598414698 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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