daily water usage in Americans homes

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daily water usage in Americans' homes

The bar chart given shows the data of daily water usage of homes in America in terms of five different purposes. The water consumption is measured in gallon per day and is compared both when with and without the water conservation methods is taken. It is obvious that water conservation methods save large amount of water for Americans. Additionally, water is consumed mostly in flushing toilets, washing clothes and taking showers.
Firstly, it is interesting that whether the conservation technique is used or not, the amount of water consumed for washing dishes, using faucets and other uses remains the same pattern. On the other hand, people in American can save up to 10 gallons a day from 20 gallons to 10 gallons for flushing toilets by taking water conservation methods.
An American use 13 gallons per day for taking a shower and this figure can be reduced to 10 if the water is conserved. Homes in America use over 15 gallons of water a day to wash clothes in a washing machine. With conservation methods, this purpose will only take 12 gallons. Leaks waste about 10 gallons a day but if conservation technique is used, the amount of water consumed can be reduced by 4 and approach 6 gallons per day
As can be seen clearly, water conservation methods help Americans to save a great deal of water while the water supply is becoming in short. It is interesting to notice that people living in America can save up to 20 gallons of water a day if they decide to use the conservation technique.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, while, in short, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7196969697 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6923239481 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469696969697 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9147894214 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.272727273 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280125014592 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120622307863 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837654799479 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186641005174 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880900039599 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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