describe line graph
The line graph compares five sectors in terms of the number of people using different communication services over a period of 10 years worldwide.
It is clear that from 1998 to 2008, there was a slight increase in the number of each communication service users. The most remarkable increase was seen in cellular phone service.
In 1998, the figures for Cell phone and Internet users started at around 5 per 100 inhabitants. They both increased during the remainder of the period; however, cellphone service gained the higher position in 2008 at around 60 users per 100 in habitants. This statistic was three times as much as that of Internet service in the same year.
From the time onwards, the number of inhabitants using three other types of service nearly stayed unchanged with the slightly increase from 13 to 15 per 100 habitants for landline service. Also, the figures for Mobile and Fixed broadband shared the similar pattern which both started at a very low number in 1998 and reached nearly 5 per 100 inhabitants in the last year.
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|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-25 | Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Dung | 11 | view |
- With the rapid advancement of communication technology such as smartphones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantagesoutweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- An increasing number of people are changing their careers.What are the reasons? Do you think this is a positive or negative development to society?" 84
- describe line graph 11
- Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- The bar chart below shows percentage of adults of different age groups inthe UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006 78
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...5 per 100 inhabitants in the last year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91011235955 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55165051258 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3265219006 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0437594851011 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0222948123267 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589865289432 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445896246533 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07723149539 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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