The figure elucidates development process to convert a fishing area to hotel resort for tourism.
Looking for first map, you can see clearly fishing area with fishing ships in sea and small building area with narrow road, a little service.
After the development process you can see a new city with wonderful instructions, also new vertical road of the end another city was built. The older road has many new instructions and has become a lot of services and widely more.
In conclusion, the second map modern and better more than the first map and that have anew activity for tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 33.7804878049 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 490.0 965.302439024 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 101.0 196.424390244 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85148514851 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.17015387972 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48910969856 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 65.0 106.607317073 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643564356436 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 150.3 283.868780488 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.1905639378 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178980232661 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10604804523 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145003750474 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129748494972 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152514591827 0.0819641961636 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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