The diagram below gives information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of how fish pies are manufactured.
Overall, what stands out from the chart is that the production contains two main lines: potato and salmon preparations. It is also apparent that fish, potatoes together with peas and sauce are the ingredients in making fish pies.
The first manufacturing line shows how the potatoes are being processed. They are delivered and to be stored up to a month prior to the cleaning process. Afterwards, cuts washed potatoes are peeled and cut into straight thin slices. After being boiled and chilled, the potatoes are stored in packages, waiting to be put into the final product together with other ingredients.
The second food processing line highlights the preparation of fish; in this case, salmon is delivered to the factory within 12 hours in order to ensure its quality. Firstly, the fresh salmon is seasoned with lemon juice and salt. It is then steamed in an oven and deboned and skinned by workers before being inspected by an expert.
At this stage, prepared peas and sauce are put into the cooked salmon containers. Finally, with the prepared potatoes slices, the pies are ready to be assembled into microwavable containers. They will be wrapped, frozen and then stored or dispatched to retailers such as supermarkets or convenience stores.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, second, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11059907834 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73153353578 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599078341014 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.844820482 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3076923077 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0755530561842 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313912364283 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429208503469 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599483602654 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507617347783 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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