The diagram compared two main mail service companies and their delivered mail numbers during from 1920 to 2000.
Overall, it is clearly seen that beginning of the period, the number of parcels delivered by FedEx was significantly higher than TNT; however, it was overtaken by TNT company end of the period.
At the beginning the number of parcels by delivered FedEx was 15000 which was three times higher than TNT. There was a considerable rise the number of the parcels by delivered FedEx until 1940 and it was reach peak with approximately 24000 at the same time. However, this upward trend was suddenly broken and delivered mails number declined dramatically and reach about 12500. It was remain stable until 1960 and 1980. It stood at roughly 18000 and until end of the period it stayed same level.
On the other hand, the number of delivered mail by TNT company was increase throughout the whole period except between 1960 and 1980.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 33.7804878049 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 259.0 965.302439024 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 51.0 196.424390244 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07843137255 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.67234511778 3.73543355544 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56675579168 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 41.0 106.607317073 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.803921568627 0.547539520022 147% => OK
syllable_count: 75.6 283.868780488 27% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375752449259 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.311398138207 0.103423049105 301% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203309023617 0.0843802449381 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311398138207 0.15604864568 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203309023617 0.0819641961636 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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