The diagram below gives information about Southland's main convey in 2000 , 2020 and future projections for 2025 .
Overall , this diagram shows the income of Southland from international tourism , dairy products and meat products in the past years and the income it intends to receive in the future .
In 2000 , 8 billion earn from international tourism , and in 2020 , 1 billion more were earned than in 2000 . By 2025 , it is planned to earn 10 billion from international tourism . In 2000 , dairy products were exported for 7 billion . Dairy products were the least exported in 2000 . In 2020 , 10 billion exported from this products . It is planned to export 9,5 billion products in the future . One of the least exported meat products in Southland . In 2000 , meat products were exported for 6 billion . In 2020 , exported were 0,5 billion less than in 2000 . In 2025 , it is planned to export products worth 5 billion products .
In this chart we can see that the lower income over the past years is therefore projected to be a good income in the future .
The diagram below gives information about Southland's main convey in 2000 , 2020 and future projections for 2025 .
Overall , this diagram shows the income of Southland from international tourism , dairy products and meat products in the past years and the income it intends to receive in the future .
In 2000 , 8 billion earn from international tourism , and in 2020 , 1 billion more were earned than in 2000 . By 2025 , it is planned to earn 10 billion from international tourism . In 2000 , dairy products were exported for 7 billion . Dairy products were the least exported in 2000 . In 2020 , 10 billion exported from this products . It is planned to export 9,5 billion products in the future . One of the least exported meat products in Southland . In 2000 , meat products were exported for 6 billion . In 2020 , exported were 0,5 billion less than in 2000 . In 2025 , it is planned to export products worth 5 billion products .
In this chart we can see that the lower income over the past years is therefore projected to be a good income in the future .
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- The chart lower gives information on the percentage of British persons give money to helping hand by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 The least charitable were those ages 18 to 25 years In 2010 10 percent less donations were made than in 1990 In 1990
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- The chart lower gives information on the percentage of British persons give money to helping hand by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 The least charitable were those ages 18 to 25 years In 2010 10 percent less donations were made than in 1990 In 1990
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ion about Southlands main convey in 2000 , 2020 and future projections for 2025 . ...
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... of Southland from international tourism , dairy products and meat products in the...
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...come it intends to receive in the future . In 2000 , 8 billion earn from inter...
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...from international tourism , and in 2020 , 1 billion more were earned than in 2000...
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...ion from international tourism . In 2000 , dairy products were exported for 7 bill...
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...iry products were exported for 7 billion . Dairy products were the least exported ...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...products were the least exported in 2000 . In 2020 , 10 billion exported from this...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ere the least exported in 2000 . In 2020 , 10 billion exported from this products ...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...00 . In 2020 , 10 billion exported from this products . It is planned to export 9,5 ...
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..., 10 billion exported from this products . It is planned to export 9,5 billion pro...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...xport 9,5 billion products in the future . One of the least exported meat products...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...east exported meat products in Southland . In 2000 , meat products were exported f...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ted meat products in Southland . In 2000 , meat products were exported for 6 billi...
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Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...eat products were exported for 6 billion . In 2020 , exported were 0,5 billion les...
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...ts were exported for 6 billion . In 2020 , exported were 0,5 billion less than in ...
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Line 5, column 561, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...orted were 0,5 billion less than in 2000 . In 2025 , it is planned to export produ...
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Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed were 0,5 billion less than in 2000 . In 2025 , it is planned to export products...
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... 0,5 billion less than in 2000 . In 2025 , it is planned to export products worth ...
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...export products worth 5 billion products . In this chart we can see that the l...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...products worth 5 billion products . In this chart we can see that the lower in...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...jected to be a good income in the future .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84357541899 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63604735821 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402234636872 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.427860873 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6923076923 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 1.69756097561 1649% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.550982531475 0.215688989381 255% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232295265926 0.103423049105 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169117109034 0.0843802449381 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.424236463795 0.15604864568 272% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195234473713 0.0819641961636 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 8.06136585366 77% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ion about Southlands main convey in 2000 , 2020 and future projections for 2025 . ...
^^
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...0 , 2020 and future projections for 2025 . Overall , this diagram shows the in...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uture projections for 2025 . Overall , this diagram shows the income of Southl...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... of Southland from international tourism , dairy products and meat products in the...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...come it intends to receive in the future . In 2000 , 8 billion earn from inter...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s to receive in the future . In 2000 , 8 billion earn from international touri...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... billion earn from international tourism , and in 2020 , 1 billion more were earne...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...from international tourism , and in 2020 , 1 billion more were earned than in 2000...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... 1 billion more were earned than in 2000 . By 2025 , it is planned to earn 10 bill...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... more were earned than in 2000 . By 2025 , it is planned to earn 10 billion from i...
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...rn 10 billion from international tourism . In 2000 , dairy products were exported ...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ion from international tourism . In 2000 , dairy products were exported for 7 bill...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...iry products were exported for 7 billion . Dairy products were the least exported ...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...products were the least exported in 2000 . In 2020 , 10 billion exported from this...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ere the least exported in 2000 . In 2020 , 10 billion exported from this products ...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...00 . In 2020 , 10 billion exported from this products . It is planned to export 9,5 ...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., 10 billion exported from this products . It is planned to export 9,5 billion pro...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...xport 9,5 billion products in the future . One of the least exported meat products...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...east exported meat products in Southland . In 2000 , meat products were exported f...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ted meat products in Southland . In 2000 , meat products were exported for 6 billi...
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Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eat products were exported for 6 billion . In 2020 , exported were 0,5 billion les...
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Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ts were exported for 6 billion . In 2020 , exported were 0,5 billion less than in ...
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Line 5, column 561, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...orted were 0,5 billion less than in 2000 . In 2025 , it is planned to export produ...
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Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed were 0,5 billion less than in 2000 . In 2025 , it is planned to export products...
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Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... 0,5 billion less than in 2000 . In 2025 , it is planned to export products worth ...
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Line 5, column 631, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...export products worth 5 billion products . In this chart we can see that the l...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...products worth 5 billion products . In this chart we can see that the lower in...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...jected to be a good income in the future .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84357541899 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63604735821 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402234636872 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.427860873 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6923076923 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 1.69756097561 1649% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.550982531475 0.215688989381 255% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232295265926 0.103423049105 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169117109034 0.0843802449381 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.424236463795 0.15604864568 272% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195234473713 0.0819641961636 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 8.06136585366 77% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.