The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature Write a 150-word description of this diagram for a university lecturer
The diagram above illustrates the natural carbon cycle going through various steps. This essay gives a full description of this cycle.
To begin with, sunlight from the Sun is transferred into organic carbon thanks to trees through a stage called photosynthesis. This carbon then goes into the ground when plants and animal die or decay. However, a part of it may stay underground as a form of fossil and fossil fuels.
Following that, during the second main stage which is the formation of CO2 cycle, it is noticeable that carbon comes from several ways. Not only do animals and plant respire carbon but transportations and factory also release a huge amount of it. Then this carbon with the sunlight start over from the beginning and that’s when a carbon cycle is completed.
In conclusion, all of the stages which are mentioned above describe fully the cycle of carbon in the natural environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...n cycle is completed. In conclusion, all of the stages which are mentioned above descri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, second, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02631578947 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6746152026 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638157894737 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8691387522 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8888888889 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232320452035 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995209335437 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887532203919 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160250496336 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111673660023 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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