The diagram below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. The evolution of the horse, with particular emphasis on the changing foot structure.
The pictures displays about the horse's evolution from 40 million years ago up to the present, giving specific attention to the foot structure.
The first of the kind of the horse species is called Eohippus which appeared 40 million years ago. Its foot had five toenails. After 10 million years since its appearance, came Mesohippus. Its foot structure had three toenails.
Then Merychippus came into existence 15 million years after. Noticeable changes on the body parts are the tail, mane and flank. Its foot structure also had three toenails and the middle one seemed to be the largest and longest than those side by side.
Modern day horses as what people have now in the green pastures are way bigger than those that existed before time. The tail, flank and mane are all in shape and so are prominent. As to its foot, it composed a big, bold, single structure that carries the weight of the animal. It is connected to the long bone by two small bone structures.
It is clear how the horse species have evolved and its foot structures from million years ago.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'display'.
Suggestion: display
The pictures displays about the horses evolution from 40 mill...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'horses'' or 'horse's'?
Suggestion: horses'; horse's
The pictures displays about the horses evolution from 40 million years ago up ...
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...ve evolved and its foot structures from million years ago.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77419354839 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31395251215 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6226407023 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3076923077 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16417087166 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593416142496 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542081272619 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107533340265 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058339997776 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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