The diagram demonstrates the phases of life of a type of fish named salmon.
Overall, the life cycle of salmon consists three primary stages, starting from eggs and ending when the fish are fully mature and produce their next generation.
This type of aquatic creatures lay their pea sized eggs in the upper river with slow flow of water. They are surrounded by some small stones in the reeds and it takes them approximately five to six months to hatch. The "fry" fish, the size of which is from three to eight centimeters, then move to the lower position where has faster current.
In the following step, after nearly four years, the baby fish grow up and become "smolt" ones which are three to four times bigger. Afterwards, they migrate to open sea for around half of a decade and then reach maturity. The "adult salmon", whose length from 70 to 76 cm, return to their original river to start reproducing and the life cycle starts over again.
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes 89
- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared 84
- The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries 79
- The maps below show the sites of a school in 2013 and the planned one in 2016 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 71
- The diagrams below show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83928571429 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67451412291 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672619047619 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.91771732 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120737288837 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572229743677 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642567433576 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996069319414 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616643045779 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.