The diagrams below illustrate the process of a sizable kind of fish called Salmon’s whole life.
That is vividly apparent that Salmons have to pass three significant stages in their life period to become adult salmon from fry. Furthermore, their size and bigness changes in every level remarkably.
At the first level, eggs are lied near small stones protecting by reeds, which are located in upper river with slow water speed, for approximately 6 months. Then eggs turn to fry, which length is around 3 to 8 cm. these creatures live in lower river with fast flowing. After passing approx4 years, their growth is still continuous and fry is turned into smolt ,which length is 12 to 15 cm. In the next last part 5 years old smolts are considered as adult salmos which are able to breed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...rkably. At the first level, eggs are lied near small stones protecting by reeds, ...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... continuous and fry is turned into smolt ,which length is 12 to 15 cm. In the next...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, still, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78985507246 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42866078214 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.768115942029 0.547539520022 140% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0952251056 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.625 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927595953979 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416457876296 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820488231883 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104572700737 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103061841024 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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