The diagram below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.
The Delineated diagram reveals the information about the design of house by its principles for two types of climates: cool and warm which is clearly and coherently represented.
It is crystal clear from the presentation that, the designing of house for both climates was different. For cool climate material of building used for storage of best was high angled roof. Window was in one side of the room from where sunlight directly entered into the house and house was heated. Also, storage of heat in roon prevents the insulation.
Moving further, in warm climate, there were two windows in the house was well as house was in shape of hut. Besides It, it had been observed that during day external insulation and reflection took place even, roof overhangs had used to prevent the heat entering in house. Further more, Windows had been closed to prevent sun light while in the night windows were opened so that air passes through the house and house becomes cool at night.
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- The diagram below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g day external insulation and reflection took place even, roof overhangs had used...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83233532934 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38240589848 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1306986933 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293555060468 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13169483825 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124596137243 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234875344357 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127162986849 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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