The provided pictorial representation depicts the information about the life cycle of a product with its effects on the environment.
Overall,it is apparent that the proceaa of manufacturing involves different stages and each possesses threat to the nature.
First and foremost, planning and designing takes place and then all the required material and energy resources are gathered to start the production of a particular product.Similarly, after production the packing and distribution of the product takes place.Likely in these stages a number of different materials for packing are used that has detrimental effects on the environment.
Simultaneously, the sales of those manufactured products start after that customers use those product.Likewise after using the goods the user generally have two options that is too dump that product or to recycle it.Furthermore, recycled products are sended it to the second stage to be again used as raw material.Lastly,a feedback is asked from the customers so the manufacturers can improve their products quality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...s effects on the environment. Overall,it is apparent that the proceaa of manufac...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Similarly
... the production of a particular product.Similarly, after production the packing and distr...
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Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Likely
...distribution of the product takes place.Likely in these stages a number of different m...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this product' or 'those products'?
Suggestion: this product; those products
...products start after that customers use those product.Likewise after using the goods the user...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Likewise
... after that customers use those product.Likewise after using the goods the user generall...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
... after that customers use those product.Likewise after using the goods the user generall...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to dump'?
Suggestion: to dump
...user generally have two options that is too dump that product or to recycle it.Furthermo...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dumped'.
Suggestion: dumped
... generally have two options that is too dump that product or to recycle it.Furthermo...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
... too dump that product or to recycle it.Furthermore, recycled products are sended it to the...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lastly
... stage to be again used as raw material.Lastly,a feedback is asked from the customers ...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
... to be again used as raw material.Lastly,a feedback is asked from the customers so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, likewise, second, similarly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72327044025 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5009816838 2.65546596893 132% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635220125786 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.884831751 43.030603864 316% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.5 112.824112599 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.75 22.9334400587 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.5 5.23603664747 353% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14093644267 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939490544353 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540279618425 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939490544353 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540279618425 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 13.2329268293 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 61.2550243902 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 10.3012195122 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.06136585366 134% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.