The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-minute information on a the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown
The figure illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers up-to-the minute information on the climate in order to manufacture truthful forecasts. Overall, there are eight steps, beginning with the incoming information from satellite and ending with broadcast.
As you can observe from the first step,in order to get a data to be analysed and forecasted,the information have to be gathered exactly as possible on every single minute about the climate.Which comes from a satellite, a radar and a drifting buoy. Then, all the data that have been gathered are sent to headquarter,which is Australian Bureau of Meteorology as satellite photos, radar screens, synoptic charts where it going to be analyzed and manufactured into truthful information. After this, the most reliable information that have been produced, will be prepared on computer to forecast. Eventually, the information will come to entire Australian's spectators via television's news, radio and recorded announcement from telephone.
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-minute information on a the weather in order to produce reliable forecastsWrite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown 50
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-minute information on a the weather in order to produce reliable forecastsWrite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Which
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72847682119 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28496848353 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64238410596 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.89206581 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.166666667 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209199450497 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113618379615 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885647417809 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190687603563 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582655069739 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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