The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.

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The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.

Submitted by javad_70 on Mon, 07/30/2018 - 06:14

The figure show the heating process for a building. Central heating system in a house comprise of different part such as water tank, storage tank, boiler, pump, radiators and connection line. In addition this operation is a reciprocator process that continuously water is heated and cooled. Content of equipment is identified according to bigness of house.
First cold water into house is gone to storage tank in two line and. So boiler receive water from storage tank and heat it with burning oil or gas, eventually water is pumped to consecutively hot water radiators to put all small tube of them all around the house.
Water after circulating across the house is being cool and return to storage tank for reheating. At this time if storage tank is being overloaded the extra amount of water will be sent to water tank by over flow pipe or hot water to taps.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'shows'.
Suggestion: shows
The figure show the heating process for a building. Cen...
^^^^
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...ding. Central heating system in a house comprise of different part such as water tank, stor...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...pump, radiators and connection line. In addition this operation is a reciprocator proces...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...entified according to bigness of house. First cold water into house is gone to s...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77333333333 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51042271784 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2354949127 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0752800958682 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459149687209 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432968291825 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617077770784 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531504043986 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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