The diagram illustrates the various stages in the production and preparation for sale of coffee.
It is noticeable that there are eleven main stages in the development of coffee, from the coffee beans to the production in supermarkets and shops.
The production of coffee begins when the coffee beans are picked from the tree by farmers. Afterwards, farmers dry those coffee beans in the field. During the third stage of producing coffee, the coffee beans are roasted and then cooled quickly. In the subsequent stage, those coffee beans are grinded and mixed with hot water. After straining, the mixture is froze.
During the ninth stage of the cycle, the froze mixture of coffee beans and water is grinded and dried in a vacuum to help the water out. Finally, the coffee is packed into jars for sale in supermarkets and shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The diagram illustrates the various stag...
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... and preparation for sale of coffee. It is noticeable that there are eleven m...
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...roduction in supermarkets and shops. The production of coffee begins when the...
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... water. After straining, the mixture is froze. During the ninth stage of the cy...
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...er straining, the mixture is froze. During the ninth stage of the cycle, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95035460993 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46374036756 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6802692767 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5555555556 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26142621703 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12170028717 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103899126405 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184266539846 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524530854747 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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